Short Film

[DragoonKain]

Originally Posted by The Graceful Assassin

Jesus Christ you people are criticing him as if he's a professional film maker..... though it was kind of weird lol but hey whatever floats your boat. Just kinda funny how it just randomly cuts through several scenes, like the zombie eating the flesh

Our criticism was constructive criticism. We weren't saying, "It sucked. 1/10. We were giving honest feedback. Would you rather us flower it up and say, "OMG that was FANTASTIC!" That would do him no good. If he wanted nothing but flowery speech he could head over to some kiddy as forum and ask the 12 year old kids what they think about it.

[Warrior of Light]

thats ok i like constructive critizism. I finished it and fixed all the problems you have mentioned and summ more. And when i can ill show it to you. But its a surpris for the contest.

[new_KEYBLADE9]

haha..you spelled Coming Soon wrong...but other than that, it was okay...although the guy in the mask needed a voice over...

[Warrior of Light]

Ya i need to fix the words. But the final product has sound changes so you can actull understand him.

[The Graceful Assassin]

Originally Posted by DragoonKain

Our criticism was constructive criticism. We weren't saying, "It sucked. 1/10. We were giving honest feedback. Would you rather us flower it up and say, "OMG that was FANTASTIC!" That would do him no good. If he wanted nothing but flowery speech he could head over to some kiddy as forum and ask the 12 year old kids what they think about it.

I was just kidding lol.

I'm sure you could go SOMEWHERE with the movie if you edited it.... or remade it entirely lol jk

Seriously, you should make it into a comedy like scary movie. That way it looks cheesy for a reason lol

[Warrior of Light]

This one is suirious. But im thinking of making a comidy about a teenage zombie going to high school.